Sofie K Werkers ([info]nanowrimelle) wrote,
@ 2003-11-17 16:57:00
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Current mood:blah

No novel here, just some haikus

Someone started a "Sucking, in haiku" thread on the NaNo forums, and well, I got carried away. Behold!

My plot does not move
I plod through darkness and mud
No one heeds my cries

I know where I am
How to get where I'm going?
Not a goddamn clue

Perhaps I should just
Make the boys kiss? Sudden, yes,

But it would please me

I have found the key!
Pardon me, may I borrow
Fantasy cliche?

Typing word by word
With only one goal in mind:
Get me to the smut!

Wrist whimpers sadly
"Please, misstress, no more, no more!"
Still I continue




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[info]nanodemon
2003-11-17 08:17 am UTC (link)
bwahahaha! Brilliant, m'dear. I especially like:

Perhaps I should just
Make the boys kiss? Sudden, yes,
But it would please me


and

Typing word by word
With only one goal in mind:
Get me to the smut!


I so feel you.

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[info]nanowrimelle
2003-11-17 08:29 am UTC (link)
Heehee. See, if I could figure out how and why they'll finally end up snogging, I'd be very tempted to just jump ahead to said snogging, but alas! I must plod on.

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[info]wimmeke
2003-11-17 09:42 am UTC (link)
In mijn verhaal hebben al twee meisjes gekust en zelfs elkaars borsten betast. Voor mij mag je gaan met dat kussen ;-)

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[info]nanowrimelle
2003-11-17 10:39 am UTC (link)
Woehoe! :D Kijk, als ik wist hoe ik ze moet doen kussen was het allang gebeurd ...

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[info]wimmeke
2003-11-17 03:16 pm UTC (link)
Tja, die van mij hadden gewoon ruzie, en om het weer goed te maken namen ze elkaar in de armen en van het een kwam het ander. Maar van meisjes word zoiets de dag van vandaag nog aanvaard. Alhoewel het van mij in de 16de eeuw moest geweest zijn maar je weet hoe goed ik voorbereid ben he... Momentje, hoe ging dat juist ook alweer...
Instead of getting dressed, Susan took her underwear off again and sat on it, her feet dangling in the water. Catherine went to sit close next to her, both girls were shivering. “He’s still there, knocked out.”, Catherine said. Susan looked at the blue thing on the bank too. “Poor man, do you think he saw us ?”, Susan asked. “At least you looked partially decent !”, Catherine laughed, “where would he be from ?”. “Shouldn’t we be getting dressed ?”, Susan replied. “Hey, you just took it all off again. Let’s wait until we’re dried up again, I have nothing to wear under that, remember ? And you’re right, there is nobody here but us. ”, Catherine said, turning towards her friend and softly caressing her skin. Susan took one last look behind her back to see if mister blue was still where they had left him, and then turned to face her friend. “Do you really think I’m beautiful ?”, Catherine wants to know. Susan thought that was a silly question, now that they were both laying around naked in the dry summer grass. “Sure you are !”, she replied. “Thanks”, Catherine said, and she quickly kissed Susan’s mouth. “You’re pretty too.”
“Hey, stop it !”, Susan yelled, as she brushed Catherine’s hand away. For a moment they stared right in each others eyes, then they both lowered their eyes. Slowly Catherine put her hands on Susan’s side again, a little bit higher now, and softly lowered them to caress Susan’s breasts. “They are bigger than mine !”, Catherine said. Susan still looked angry, but somewhat amused. Every time Catherine’s hand would brush over one of her nipples, she felt a rush of ecstasy going trough her body, she had never felt something like that before. Slowly Susan moved a little closer and started to caress Catherine’s breasts in return. “Yours are softer !”, she laughed, while she quickly looked around her shoulder to see if their hooded friend hadn’t woken up yet. “You’re silly !”, Susan suddenly yelled, and both girls embraced each other firmly. Susan slowly turned Catherine on her back and laid down on top of her. They laid like that on top of each other for several more minutes. Enjoying each others bodily warmth. Then Catherine started to kiss her friend gently on the cheek. “Don’t”, Susan said. “Let’s get dressed.”

't is slechts het laatste stukje, zo ongeveer, het beste heb je gemist, maar ja, 't moest in een comment kunnen he, en 'k wil je ook wat sparen gezien je net alis ik niet overdreven veel leestijd hebt.

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[info]nanowrimelle
2003-11-17 04:10 pm UTC (link)
Heh. "Niet overdreven veel"? Zeg maar, "geen". Ben zelfs te moe om in te tikken wat ik vandaag geschreven heb. Blah.

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